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2018年12月1日雅思考试写作回顾

 小作文:静态柱图,比较服务行业在城乡在6个地方的送货时长的差异对比,类似剑4第3套题

大作文:Some people think the money spent developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

 

朗阁名师李昂轩点评:

1. 本次考试难度适中

2. 整体分析

Task 1静态柱图

注意点:1.看清时间点,注意时态;2. Overview提到差距最大的那一组;3.主体段以两者的数量关系为依据分组

相关表达:

1. 两个对象的比较

All the same/just the same as

Contrary to B,A is ….

Conversely, B is …

A is…while B is…

There are more … than … (数据1 and 数据2 respectively).

2. 倍数关系的表达

对象A+谓语+倍数+as+ 形容词 /名词+as +对象B

对象A+谓语+倍数+比较级+(名词)+than +对象B

对象A+谓语+倍数+名词+of+对象B

Task 2 科技类话题

题目翻译:有些人认为花在开发太空探索技术上的钱是不合理的。有更多有益的途径去花这笔钱。你同意还是不同意?

从结构上来说,可以通过四段完成写作任务:

开头段:背景句+改写题目+给出立场

让步段:陈述将资金投在别的方面的益处

辩护段:陈述资金投在太空探索的益处

结尾段:重申个人立场态度

 

Introduction:

开头段:话题背景介绍,改写题目,并给出自己不同意这个观点的立场观点。

In recent years, there have been more and more countries involved and interested in long-term space projects. Due to the enormous research expenditures, the value of space projects has been disputed. Some individuals argue that the government should spend the budget on other more beneficial areas, instead of the space research. However, I disagree with this statement.

 

Body 1:

让步段:确实,资金投入到别的方面能带来一些好的效益。分别从教育和医疗这两个高频常见的角度去论证。

Indeed, countries should allot a large proportion of their money to many sectors that brings tangible and immediate benefits and can directly improve the lives of human beings. To be specific, making education available throughout the country and eliminating illiteracy can pave the way for economic development. By receiving education, children from impoverished families can shake off poverty. Other. It is inevitable for them to remain poor throughout their lifespan and even across generations. As well as the investment in education, the government should also financially support health care and medical service. By providing th needy people with medical service, a country can inspire the loyalty of citizens who are more likely to enjoy their living.

 

Body 2:

辩护段:资金投在太空探索上带来的好处。分别从资源需求和空间需求两个层次去论证。

However, this does not automatically mean that all the expenditure should be dedicated to dealing with problems on earth. After all, there should also be enough consideration for the future development of human civilization. In this case, the investment in space research is also paid off. One of the significant factors is that our planet is now facing an unprecedented resource issue. The limited and exhausting resources on our planet push us to open energy and materials on other planets for sustainable development of our societies. Moreover, the booming population creates the usable space to shrinking, highlighting the need to seek land suitable for people’s resettlement off the planet. As there are countless planets throughout the universe, we are confident that at least one of them can be proved to be suitable for our alternative choice.

 

Conclusion:

结尾段:重申自己立场态度

As suggested above, although there are several issues that need to be funded, space research will prove to be not only worthwhile but also crucial to the survival and sustainability of human civilization.

 

考试预测:

1.小作文:重点关注动态图和流程图温馨提示:地图最近的一场是10月最后一场,而上一场考流程图却7月份的第3场, 请考生们注意留心流程图。

2.大作文:重点关注国际化/全球化、社会类(消费、慈善)、文化类及政府经济类话题。

3.重点浏览15、17年写作机经,也可借助《高分范文书》以及《剑桥雅思系列》经典旧题来复习。


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