首页 > 名师考题预测 >

2018年9月8日托福考试写作回顾

综合写作:

探讨在美国西岸三番至LA修建high-speed railway line的利弊。

 

独立写作:

Nowadays college or university professors prohibit students from the use of devices that can connect to the Internet (such as laptop computers, smartphones)while in the class. Do you agree or disagree?

 

朗阁讲师林森点评

综合写作:

阅读认为有利

  1. 公路使用率下降,降低了维修费,缓解州政府的财政压力;

  2. 缓解交通拥堵;
  3. 燃料使用率高,减少污染,保护环境。

听力否定

1. 建立railway line费用很高,还贷款占税收一年75%,政府的财政负担大;


2. 这个地区公共交通不发达,人们还是会选择drive to station;

3. 这个地区的regular route很多会保留,燃料利用率并没有提高。

 

独立写作:

本题是利弊分析的经典题型,以下是笔者给出的一个参考答案:

Position: I have the preference that it is not a good idea to prohibit students from the use of devices that can connect to the Internet while in the class.

Reason 1: Obviously, thanks to the pictures and videos on the Internet, it is easier for students to understand some abstruse and difficult knowledge. In addition, a large number of relevant knowledge on the Internet can help students build knowledge system faster. (由于网上有关于知识的图片和视频,学生能够更好地理解艰深的知识点,同时网上大量的相关知识可以帮助学生快速建立知识体系)

Reason 2: Second, the process of searching information on the Internet can cultivate students' independent learning ability, and promote the ability to handle numerous information which plays a vital role in their success in the future. (在网上搜寻信息的过程也可以培养学生的独立学习能力,以及整合大量信息的能力)

Concession: It is true that these devices may attract students' attention, therefore, distracting them from real learning.(这是一个让步段,表明尽管互联网设配可能会干扰学生的学习,但可以通过一些网络限制或者使用时间段的限制解决这个问题)

 

考试预测

本题是最常考的利弊分析题型,希望同学们在备考过程中予以重视。

1.Parents should allow children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes. 2.Schools should use computers as a tool of education for children aged 4 to 7.

 


文中图片素材来源网络,如有侵权请联系删除