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2019年7月27日雅思考试写作回顾

 小作文: 静态柱图

大作文: Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or they want to do?Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?

 

朗阁名师吴丹琪点评

 

本次考试难度简单。

简单题更考验各自的语言功底和逻辑实力,而逻辑,一定要有细节

 

小作文:静态图。排序比大小。需要写出最值,倍数,比较等特殊的数值。

静态图比较难的是句型和词汇不能太重复。

排序公式:sth is the dominant..., which people usually do,

          =the amount of ...is the largest

          the figure for A is considerably more than that for B.

          A occupies ..., which is equivalent to/,which doubles B.

 

大作文题目:父母满足孩子想要的一切和所有想做的事,是好事么?对未来的后果是什么?

注意审题:本题观点必须为坏处多,且是对未来的负面影响。

参考论点:

part 1:溺爱不好。部分父母认为to满足孩子需求is to给他们最好的爱。

1. 父母be overwhelmed with工作,很少陪伴。觉得给孩子最好的物质条件并且顺着孩子心意,是爱他们。

2.也有些父母,出于尊重,支持孩子的兴趣爱好,如支持学舞蹈,支持创业。但大多数孩子distinguishing ability不足,想要玩游戏,而spoil他们会造成沉迷,due to which浪费学习的光阴。甚至gambling,暴力,drug-using等,一定不能允许。

 

part 2:对孩子们未来造成undesirable/irrevocable effects.

1.excessively的物质如小到零食和玩具,大到电子产品等全部满足,可能造成compare unrealistically和不正常消费观money-oriented value,长大后甚至经济犯罪。而且过多消费也造成浪费。

2.完全顺从孩子,让孩子变得self-centered,性格自私,甚至,不尊重别人,不遵守学校规则等规则。不体谅别人,不换位思考,不利于人际交往。尤其职场不利于合作。

3.依赖父母,身心都不够独立。有些人长大后都无法生活自理。遇到挫折后,沮丧甚至抑郁。相比之下,生活和社会中的问题需要自己解决,压力需要自己承受。

因此,父母一味的满足孩子的需求反而有害。

 

观点:over-indulgence孩子肯定是不好的。满足合理要求和愿望is advisable,这需要父母理性的判断和正确的价值观引导。

加分同义词——

1. buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want=overly permissive= spoil their children= constantly give in to their children's demands= indulgent or lenient parents

2. a way to raise children=a parenting style=a style of parenting 

3. as they get older=grow up 

4. discipline=clear expectations and boundaries=say "no" to children= regulate their desires and develop self-control 

5. impulsiveness=compulsive

 

 

旧题回顾:(permissive parenting2017年旧题)Some parentsbuy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

 

 

考试预测

 

1. 小作文:地图>流程>静态图

2. 大作文:暑假大作文通常都简单。教育类>政府类>环保类>媒体类。


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