小作文：动态柱图（三个国家的农业、工业、服务业的用人比例的过去的占比和对未来的预测）

大作文：In some cities there are few control over the design and construction of new houses and building offices, so people build in whatever style they want. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this development?

 

朗阁名师李昂轩点评

1. 本次考试难度适中。

2. 整体分析：

Task 1动态柱图

注意点：

1. 注意本题涉及不同时态，对过去的描述及将来的预测；

2. 注意描写对象需分组与揭示不同组之间的关系；

3. 注意不同对象切换需要有衔接。

 

描述变化的相关表达：

1. 简单句：主谓宾

The amount of …increased sharply from 数据1 in 年份1 to 数据2 in 年份2.

2. 简单句：there be

There was a sharp increase in… from 数据1 in年份1 to数据2 in年份2.

3. 简单句：目睹变化

The period between年份1and 年份2 witnessed an upward trend from数据1 to 数据2 in…

4. 简单句：相同趋势

A similar trend was found in… in 国家from数据1 in年份1 to数据2 in年份2 (假设前述其他国家也是上升的)

5. 简单句：不同趋势

A diverse trend was found in… in 国家 from数据1in年份1 to数据2 in年份2. (假设前述其他国家是下降的)

6. 起点数据分词

Starting at数据1 in年份1, the amount of … increased sharply to数据2 in年份2.

7. 终点数据分词

The amount of … revealed an upward trend from数据1 in年份1, reaching数据2 in年份2.

8. 时间状语从句

The amount of … indicated an upward trend between年份1 and年份2, when it increased sharply from数据1 to数据2 kg.

9. before句型

The amount of… was 数据1 in年份1, before increasing sharply to 数据2 in年份2.

10. 定语从句

The amount of …, which was only数据1 in年份1, increased sharply to 数据2 in年份2.

11. with结构

The amount of…outlined an upward trend, with a sharp increase from数据1 in年份1 to数据2 in年份2.

Task 2 城市类话题

题目翻译：在一些城市，对新房子和建筑办公室的设计和建设几乎没有控制，所以人们用任意方式建造。你认为这种发展的优点大于缺点吗？

本次大作文是一篇比较优缺点类文章，从结构上来说，可以通过四段完成写作任务：

开头段：背景句+个人观点

主体段1：陈述这一现象的优点

主体段2：提出这一现象的缺点

结尾段：总结并重申观点

 

Introduction:

开头段：

Nowadays, more and more individuals and companies demand to have a complete control over the design of their residential properties without any interference from the authority. 如今，越来越多的个人和公司要求完全控制其住宅物业的设计而不受当局的干涉。

Personally, the disadvantages exceed advantages. In this essay, information and evidence are given to clarify my point of views.

    就个人而言，弊大于利。本文通过以下证据来说明我的观点。

 

Body 1:

主题段1：Advantages：

With the freedom to build personal architectures, individuals are enabled to use their creativity and imagination to create unique and modernized houses which make the cities look incredibly attractive to citizens and tourists.

有了建造个人建筑的自由，个人就能够利用他们的创造力和想象力创造出独特的、现代化的房屋，使城市对公民和游客具有难以置信的吸引力。

Additionally, giving residents the power to decide their houses’ style will save a substantial amount of the governments’ revenue.

此外，赋予居民决定自己住房风格的权力，将节省大量政府收入。

Since people now pay individually for the architects, the authority is released from the budget burden.

因为现在人们为建筑师单独付费，所以相关机构从预算负担中释放出来。

 

Body 2:

主体段2：Disadvantages:

When being strictly administrated by law, the consistency of building structure has a significant chance of being guaranteed, as the authorities normally have the long-term project plans for building design and construction.

在严格依法管理的情况下，由于有关部门通常有长期的建筑设计和施工项目计划，因此建筑结构的一致性有很大可能得到保证。

Without any strict control on the construction, there will always a risk of damaging the surrounding architectures.

如果不对施工进行严格控制，总会有破坏周围建筑的危险。

Although the beauty and usage of construction depend on each individual aesthetic, the safety is highly prioritized under any circumstances, as the freedom in design may compromise to the safety.

尽管建筑物的外观和使用取决于每个人的审美，但安全在任何情况下都是高度优先的，因为设计的自由可能危及安全。

 

结尾段：

To conclude, I believe that despite having some clearly advantages of allowing people more freedom to design their housing or office building, the disadvantages are stronger for the above mentioned reason

总而言之，我认为，尽管允许人们更自由地设计他们的住房或办公楼有一些明显的优点，但是由于上述原因，缺点更加明显。

 

考试预测

1.小作文：重点关注静态图。

2.大作文：在继续保持关注教育类话题情况下，重点关注社会类、科技类与文化类话题。

3.重点浏览15、17年写作机经，也可借助《高分范文书》以及《剑桥雅思系列》经典旧题来复习。

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